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First Amendment Essay-Art Contest 2009

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Here is a link to the Chicago Tribune's contest rules and downloadable form. Please fill out the form to turn in with your final draft/artwork.

 

Final drafts are due Wednesday, 4/22 (periods 1 & 6) and Thursday, 4/23 (periods 3, 4, & 9). When you turn in your final copy please make sure to do the following:

  1. Turn in two (2) copies of the final draft (one to be graded, one to be submitted to the contest).
  2. Turn in a completed contest entry form (linked above)
  3. Turn in a completed Evaluation Form with your name and the student score column filled out.

 

REMEMBER: No names or identifying information on the artwork or in the essay! 

 

Below are some pointers from the guru of teaching students to read and write well, Nancie Atwell:

A few tips for effective and engaging essay introductions:

  • Anecdote - a quick story to illustrate a point
  • Quotation - usually from someone famous (though it could be someone from your own life, too)
  • Background - information about the topic or about yourself
  • News - current events
  • Announcement - a quick, to-the-point introduction to the topic

 

A few introductions to avoid ...

  • A question ("Can you imagine living in a world without freedom? Well, ... ")
  • A clichee or bromide ("Give me liberty or give me death!")
  • A dictionary definition ("Webster's defines freedom as 'the absence of necessity, coercion, or constraint in choice or action.'")

 

A few ideas for effective and satisfying conclusions:

  • Admonition or instruction - what the reader can do about the issue
  • Prediction - an insight into how the future might be different, better, or worse
  • Strong, punched statement - perhaps a one-sentence paragraph
  • Anecdote - a brief story that reiterates the essence of the issue/situation
  • Pointed question - leaves the reader thinking
  • Echo - circles back to the lead (without being a restatement)

 

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